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• ForestIsWatching ⬤

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Mentor: LiminalDoctor

Response time: Varying. I am still guaranteed to respond.

Will crit: Anything not mentioned in "won't crit". Need help with themes, even if it's not about tech? Throw them at me! (I'm not a CSS wizard, though.)

Won't crit: Lore, anything that is beyond repair.

Strengths: Concept, Format, Wikidot Syntax.

Weaknesses: SPaG, Tone, Worldbuilding. You may still ask me about those.

Likes: Narrative, strong emotions and mystery. I crave for anything that breaks the mould.

Dislikes: Lore-filled articles that leave most of their story implicit (either partly or completely,) anything that pretends to be "glorious" but has seemingly neither a purpose nor a direction.

Contact: Anything, basically, including Wikidot PMs. Please ask before DMing me though, unless I have you friended. Feel free to ping me!

Crit queue: (4/4)

Notes:
I'll be reasonably harsh in my critiques, but we can freely discuss anything I pointed out to you. I'm not great at coming up with concepts — the draft is yours, not mine, so I will only question what you already have. Absolutely never hesitate to ping me again for questions and such. (Just don't spam it.)

SPaG critiques are reserved for pages which I believe to be fairly polished. I can do quick skims without queueing, albeit not as reliably. Warn me that you do not wish to receive my feedback if you are going straight for a clear/greenlight as I will have to drop you off the queue. (I will not criticise you ever again otherwise.)

Since I'm Italian, if you have any translations you want to show me, fire them at me! It's always nice to help new folks.

• Super-Robot14 ⬤

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Mentor: DivineAtlas

Will Crit: Narrative stuff. (Like, stories and stuff). I'll also critique concept and tech stuff if you ask. Most things that are not in ‘won’t crit‘. If you want me to be more likely to give a crit, conjure up an elevator pitch of your page (a short few-sentence reason about what makes your page stand out, and why it’s worth my time to help make your page better).

Won't crit: Fully of mostly clinical pages. (Like, if a page has some clinical I won't just not crit it, but if there's a lot of clinical I won't do much). Also pages that don't hook me within a paragraph, or if you don't have an elevator pitch (or if yours doesn't hook me).

Strengths: Literally anything narrative. Like, really, if it has an underlying story I can help you make it better. I also would say I'm a pretty good wordsmith so if you're ever just stuck on how to say something in the right way, I'm your guy. I'm also good with concept, tech, and like really anything to do with narrative and stories.

Weaknesses: Clinical, SPaG.

Likes: Narrative stuff. I also really like experimental stuff too. I like things that are more than the sum of its parts, or at least has the potential to be that way.

Preferred Contact: Ping in forum for short-term critique (like a one-and-done critique) or DMs for long-term critique (for advice throughout the writing process). Though, when DMing me for the first time, make sure the first word is "Anthology" so I know what you want from me. If you do either of those, I will respond.

Note: My crits take a long time because I forget sometimes. Also if you'd like to do a long-term critique just give me your idea, even if you are only starting to draft.